At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing, what our learning intention was, was to find a book that has a descriptive sentence or paragraph and to add onto it and create an image for the reader. This is my story.
She had large, wide set green eyes, and long brown hair that curled slightly and turned to gold at the tips.
She wore a dark blue dress that flowed neatly onto the floor the delicate lace that coated the outside of it was still in tact piece by piece.
Her walk was peaceful slow and unique, her gestures were small, her voice was soft and calm. She was angelic.
She was there just there, no one realised. They were to tied up in their on un-imaginable lives.
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